Magnet for Negative Energy Cloaked in a Conundrum Wrapped in an Enigma Smoking Church Lady
Posts: 336
(9/17/01 5:39 pm) Reply
4:13 P.M. 9/17/01
Doth thou truthfully speak,
Or am I fooled like all the rest?
It matters not for
I shall see thee no more.
Be gone foul plague!
I need not
to hear thy lies!
A mindless drone, no longer words.
I shall find my saviour elsewhere.
Cast thy curse
o'er the frail and weak one
That is so adored by thee.
For no longer shall
I be thy victim!
Hmm I don't like my title yet I want to see if I can find a better one. All suggestions are appreciated.
Societys Reject
"It seems so bizarre but none of this matters. Thoughts disappear, hope has died.........the truth and the lies confused as one. I can't believe in anything sacred when I don't believe in anything." -Stabbing Westward
"And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow, I will take my place, In The Great Below" -Nine Inch Nails
Life without me, would be even more unbearable - Lestat de Lioncourt
Thou speakest interesting words mysterious one. You are very good at speaking in the old toung aren't you? Oh, and just to let you know...I AM NOT A WALKING PLAGUE DAMN IT!!!!!!...sorry about that. I had too much caffein tonight and a temper, anger, depression and caffein don't mix well...anyway, Enigma, you must keep writing, you're rather good at it. Adios.
Magnet for Negative Energy Cloaked in a Conundrum Wrapped in an Enigma Smoking Church Lady
Posts: 337
(9/18/01 4:01 pm) Reply
Re: ^-^
No no no no the poem is not about you. And oh yes do not call me 'mysterious one' I didn't think this poem was that good but I'd like some more opinions.
Societys Reject
"It seems so bizarre but none of this matters. Thoughts disappear, hope has died.........the truth and the lies confused as one. I can't believe in anything sacred when I don't believe in anything." -Stabbing Westward
"And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow, I will take my place, In The Great Below" -Nine Inch Nails
Life without me, would be even more unbearable - Lestat de Lioncourt
Magnet for Negative Energy Cloaked in a Conundrum Wrapped in an Enigma Smoking Church Lady
Posts: 343
(9/30/01 4:30 pm) Reply
Re: 4:13 P.M. 9/17/01
Doone thow verraliy speak,
Or am I ape like alle and some?
It matters nat as for
I shall see thow no mo.
Passen forth elves!
I nede ne until heer thy lith!
A agonie, clom.
I shall find my goddes elsewhere.
Passen forth thy kers
o'er the care and weak one
That is also adored by thee.
as for lat be
I ben thy victim!
I found this interesting. Some i know translated my poem into Chausers English. It's still untitled as of yet. Comments/suggestions are appreciated.
Societys Reject
"It seems so bizarre but none of this matters. Thoughts disappear, hope has died.........the truth and the lies confused as one. I can't believe in anything sacred when I don't believe in anything." -Stabbing Westward
"And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow, I will take my place, In The Great Below" -Nine Inch Nails
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