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Teirk
Peasant
Posts: 87
(8/21/01 11:32 am)
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Bitter Rampage
Savage little smile
teller of lies
sweet little liar
with the bloodshot eyes
drip drip drop
watch the wishes pop
irridescent bubbles
sanity's prop
liquid colour running
over under through
cellular flight
dream come true
crescent moon collages
shiny underneath
wonder what the cause is
see what lies beneath
heart of blue confession
seeping into skin
indifferent obsession
let the dreams begin.

i don't expect this poem to be understood, i don't expect anyone to try and interpret it, it was just something i wrote after a phone conversation which ended with me throwing the phone across the room and having a good long loud cry. no relevance except to me.

"Ford, you're turning into a penguin. Stop it."

Xx Demoness xX 
Peasant
Posts: 160
(8/22/01 10:00 pm)
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I won't attempt to interrupt then, but I like the words, brings a colorful taste to the rhythm used. ^_^

@~}~~~
Xx Demoness xX

"All that is gold does not glitter. Nor all those who wander are lost." - J.R.R. Tolkien "She wears a coat of color, Loved by some, feared by others, She's immortalized in young men's eyes"-Creed

Cecil B Demented
The Ultimate Ateur
Posts: 72
(8/26/01 10:31 am)
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brilliant....i have no idea what's going on.

~"I don't want knowledge I want certainty"-David Bowie ~"Who put shit in the taco?"-Beck ~"The fact that I'm alive disproves all religious ideas"~Me ~"Don't tell me how to cut my crumb cake!"-Teirk ~"Sometimes I wonder if I'm still alive. 6 feet down at age 25"-Brain Slade (Ballad of Maxwell Demon)

FaeryForestGirl 
Peasant
Posts: 68
(9/12/01 6:05 pm)
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Teirkin....you are amazing, you are astounding, you are phenominal. When it strikes you you are a a poetic genius. No one can compare.....no one I've read can do that. You are brilliant. The muses love you child....don't fight to be an artist or a storyteller...you are the most gifted poet I know.

Teirk
Peasant
Posts: 91
(9/13/01 2:37 pm)
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you said nice things about me! ::huuuuuuuugkisskisskiss:: i love you, i love you more than anyone anywhere ever!

"Ford, you're turning into a penguin. Stop it."

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