COMMENTS AND REVIEWS on the Adv. of Cimmerian...
Hey all,
I will be posting samples of some of my crazed writing here from time to time. This thread is for all your comments on the 'adventures of Cimmerian' series and the excerpts. Tell me what you think.
Let's have your comments, critique and reviews on this thread.
Be honest, be brutal... let the sword of Damocles hang low, my broadaxe is strong and true.
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CROM MAKE ME STRONGER!!!
Edited by: Cimmerian at: 3/20/04 6:34 pm
Good stuff there, Cimm. Well written and interesting however what is this about...
"Taking the reins he led the horse over to a watering hole, which was a vast lake the night before, need to break into two sentences here I think he watered the animal and then jumped in to bathe. "
Is it just a note to yourself?
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The only thing that matters is the ending. It's the most important part of the story...and this one is very good. This one is perfect.
Re: Thoughts...
Whoops, that was a major bloopey. My lovely friend, Gayalondiel, proof-reads some of my writing and those were her notes after correction. My bad in not removing all of them before posting a copy here as well as on fictionpress. Kinda embarrassing.
Thanks for pointing that out, DayV. I'll fix it right away.
By the way, I like to include people I know from forums online as characters in my tales and I would love to cast you in an upcoming tale. It's just that your log in name here is weird, but I'll work on it. Muah haha hah hah!
Re: Nice
Argh, Sha! Come on, you can't be serious.
Read 'Tale three', excerpt one, again. And these are just teasers to get readers interested. The entire tale I will be posting at Fictionpress.com soon. It's PG13, so I'll have to edit it a bit before I can post it all here.
Anyhow, keep watching this space for more teasers and updates.
Hmmm, evil char, you say, DV, awright. I have plans for tale seven brewing, as well as a few other tales.
And Elenna, I'm working on a Baraccus-Tigranis tale. I'll post a preview here soon.
heh heh
God, I feel really stupid now...I mean, I thought that was me...and then I wasn't quite sure...the whole "Noxian" thing should have tipped me off....
Boy,do I miss Knox...
but yes, pretty good with her characterization.
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Those who yeild are not always weak.
Thoughts...
It's not nice to make fun of people...especially me, because...um...I ROCK!
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