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stevevantine
Hello Mother Fuckers!
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(4/15/07 8:54 pm)
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Check out this hottie...
Ok, its me.

www.myspace.com/stevevantine

I write songs.. and i'm looking for any feedback (good or bad) i may not be nearly as good john mayer (vocal guitar or song structure wise) but i'm only 17 so try and keep that in mind when your telling me how terrible i suck haha

And if you haven't heard of james morrison, jon mclaughlin, or matt nathanson ..definately check them out


thanks!

HBeeClarity
Queen Bee
Posts: 4881
(4/15/07 9:50 pm)
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Re: Check out this hottie...
Hahaha. Best shameless plug ever.

eta: I just listened.

I really enjoy your voice. You say you're not much of a singer but I know guys that would punch you for saying that. Your voice reminds me of Jesse McCartney (random and I can't believe I just admitted that I like him).

I can pretty much pinpoint where some of those guitar parts came from (James Blunt, Howie Day and Jack Johnson?) but I do like your lyrics!

Keep up the work. The more you practice, the better you get!

Good job :)

-Heather

Great Indoors
Deal with it. It's rock'n'roll.

Edited by: HBeeClarity at: 4/15/07 10:01 pm
stevevantine
Hello Mother Fuckers!
Posts: 2
(4/16/07 1:57 pm)
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Thanks heather!
Wow, I can't tell you how much your feedback means to me. I spend all my weekends writing and it means the world that someone appreciates it and gets where I'm coming from..

my fanbase = My mom, and Heather.

woo!

kjc1974 
Hott Okie
Posts: 3342
(4/16/07 2:12 pm)
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Re: Check out this hottie...
I listened this morning while I was getting ready for work, but have just now had a chance to post...

I also enjoyed your music and I totally agree with Heather. Your voice does sound a lot like Jesse McCartney. (I have him on my iPod too, Heather...you aren't alone.) Also maybe a little Jimmy Eat World

"Window To The World" has a real David Gray quality, which is a plus to me, because I like him.

Of the thousands of people on MySpace who send messages or friend requests, I usually can't get through one song before I'm like, "Ok, no!" But I actually added you as a MySpace friend because I'm interested to see what other songs you'll add in the future.

Heather's right...practice will only make you better and more confident.

Keep writing and playing! :)

________________
*KJ*
AIM=Kjiz1

MySpace / Great Indoors


HBeeClarity
Queen Bee
Posts: 4882
(4/18/07 1:46 am)
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Re: Check out this hottie...
Steve, if you ever come back here and see this...I re-listened and I sent you a friend request. Seems like you're getting some good comments on your space!

Your iced tea blog made me laugh.

The end.

-Heather

Great Indoors
Deal with it. It's rock'n'roll.

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