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Angel of Destruction667
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Posts: 18
(10/2/01 7:16 pm)
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I Am Me
I am me
and no one else.
Do people know me?
No...I don't want them to.
I am dark, I hurt
and that is truly me.
I am evil, I wish to kill
anyone I see.
My life is bland,
like the coffee I live to drink.
I look so cold
as I stare at myself in the mirror above the bathroom sink.
I hate the ones that care for me,
and I never let them near.
I tense when they put a comforting hand on my shoulder,
So they will never see my fear.
I am me,
my soul I will not sell,
and yet I find that this is my life,
which is a living hell.

Enigmatican
Magnet for Negative Energy
Cloaked in a Conundrum
Wrapped in an Enigma
Smoking Church Lady

Posts: 349
(10/3/01 6:02 pm)
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Re: I Am Me
Ah yes, I remember you saying how you wanted to kill someone yesterday. You should choose the one I pointed out yesterday! He's one of...them! Yes....them. You really must post something other than all your dark poetry. Even you should have some 'happy' poetry. Even I have a bunch!

Societys Reject

"It seems so bizarre but none of this matters. Thoughts disappear, hope has died.........the truth and the lies confused as one. I can't believe in anything sacred when I don't believe in anything." -Stabbing Westward

"And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow, I will take my place, In The Great Below" -Nine Inch Nails

Life without me, would be even more unbearable - Lestat de Lioncourt

Rinoa Triste 
Peasant
Posts: 59
(10/4/01 10:41 am)
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Re: I Am Me
Really good, reminds me of myself somewhat, though i choose a different medium...

~*Rin*~

In space the stars are no more nearer they just glitter like a morgue.

Dont ask me anything: Im just an artist.

Xx Demoness xX 
Peasant
Posts: 167
(10/4/01 6:20 pm)
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Re: I Am Me
The beginning... well uh no comment about that part. The ending was okay

"All that is gold does not glitter. Nor all those who wander are lost." - J.R.R. Tolkien
"She wears a coat of color, Loved by some, feared by others, She's immortalized in young men's eyes"-Creed

Angel of Destruction667
Peasant
Posts: 19
(10/4/01 6:40 pm)
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^-^
Yes, I am perfectly aware that this is not my best work. Hell, I wouldn't even put it toward the middle of my work, but still I felt like posting. Anyway, Enigma...you don't seem to realize that I have never written @#%$ piece of happy-go-lucky poetry in my life. This only thing close may be a neutral piece and even those I have done on assignment. Besides, I usually write my best when I'm pissed off or really depressed and what the heck do you think comes out of those kind of moods? Anyway, that's for responding ^-^. Catch ya' Later.

~Peace to All as they Walk to Their Graves

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