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Reznor
Daemon Soul Posts: 662 (1/18/04 10:10 pm) Reply |
Just in a mood As the title speaks, I am just in a mood. I thought I would just crack out something... see where it goes and if there is an life to it. Any ideas to further it are always welcome. My eyes slide from side to side I'm looking for a dark corner to hide I'm frightened to expose what is inside The pain I feel, the parts that slowly die Finger nails tickle flesh Ragged edges begin to peel Crimson drops have a beautiful scent My outer self can not feel My heart thumps in my chest Resucitation is hopeless Tears of blood drip from my eyes As I chuckle ready to die Peel away the flesh that hides Expose my pain to the outside Time to deal with the my lies Convinced myself that it was good to be alive. - Reznor (R. Older) Stick a fork in me... I'm done. Enough exposing for one night. |
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NightAngel of Darkness 
Daemonic Lover Posts: 1493 (1/18/04 10:48 pm) Reply |
Beautiful
I think this poem is very well written.
On top of that it flows, and its deep. I think I will print it out and hang it on my wall!!!! |
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