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Xx Demoness xX 
Peasant
Posts: 157
(8/8/01 6:06 pm)
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My Writing
Going against my better judgment, I'm actually gonna post one of my favorite poems up here. But seriously though, this board has just sucked over the past few days, or is it weeks? I dunno, I've lost track of time. Anyway, onto the poem:

You say I'm good
I've got real talent
But I knew the truth
The public doesn't like it
They want something sappy
Something romantic and prim
Got to make it snappy
Pointless and quick
The stuff I write is not
The things they want to hear
Like the corruption of "God"
And all the things they fear
My style is completely different
No elegance at all
But I can blame that on parents
And how they burned my dolls
Does the public like that?
How stereotypical I can be?
To me that is pure trash
I like the harsh reality
I guess I should have known
That truth is a crime
So let me try a different tone
"Once upon a time..."

@~}~~~
Xx Demoness xX

"All that is gold does not glitter. Nor all those who wander are lost." - J.R.R. Tolkien "She wears a coat of color, Loved by some, feared by others, She's immortalized in young men's eyes"-Creed

Enigmatican
Magnet for Negative Energy
Possesses strange abilities
Protector of all Arachnids
Smoking Church Lady

Posts: 311
(8/8/01 6:37 pm)
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Re: My Writing
Yes it has sucked over the last few weeks. I believe me and Cyrus got a bit out of control and because of that some people left. Almost none at all have ventured back here in the last week. I was going to just retake control of Mind's Eye for a different use but I made another board and I've restored Cyrus's status as Admin. I basically just hit the 'reset' button on Mind's Eye. I want to talk to Cyrus as to making some changes regarding Mind's Eye as if I haven't done enough already. If you have any suggestions be sure to let us know.

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Enigmatica
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"It seems so bizarre but none of this matters. Thoughts disappear, hope has died.........the truth and the lies confused as one. I can't believe in anything sacred when I don't believe in anything." "Lost in a world of doubt and insecurity...life is a contradiction, while you thrive on manipulation, I fight to just hold on to what I believe, I won't become the thing I hate....I wont become you" -Stabbing Westward

"Bow down before the one you serve. You're going to get what you deserve" "And I descend from grace, In arms of undertow, I will take my place, In The Great Below" -Nine Inch Nails

Fallon
Skittle Goddess
Cloaked in a Conundrum
Wrapped in an Enigma

Posts: 38
(8/12/01 10:30 am)
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Re: My Writing
Wow, i really like this. If there is anything i can to do to not make this board suck, let me know.

"Life is nothing unless you're obsessed" ~ Pecker

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