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rwinte82 
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(8/23/03 14:33)
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Needles

Needles


Needles has barely a one ~ pipes prevail
providing a fleeting ecstasy from
the reality of played out businesses
and crack hotels ~ a gritty realism.

An ironic twist of fate
brings a misnomer for a name
to a burnt out town ~ on the edge
of existence ~ as a railroad ambles through it.

On a barren landscape ~ this town sits
the merciless sun baking
and sucking the life from it
as an octopus does its prey.

A triumvirate of evil ~ Laughlin, Bull Head City and Needles
seem lost in Christ’s Wilderness
as a river as old as ancient Egypt
brings life ~ painfully forestalling death.

A lesser of evils ~ gaming, crystal meth or smoking crack
is your choice ~ based on your beliefs
plus your locale or the avoidance of such
brings fleeting salvation here.

© 2003 by Rosemary Winters Tracey

Kuranui
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Posts: 8
(5/31/04 1:31)
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Re: Needles
I see that Needles is a town. At first I could not understand the first line, but on reading the rest of the poem, it fell into place.Wonderfully descriptive writing.

rwinte82
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Posts: 11
(9/1/07 14:45)
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Re: Needles
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