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elenna
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(4/9/04 11:37 pm)
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THE WAR FOR RIVENDELL
Note - So here's the fanfic based on the Rivendell RPG. It was compiled by Elenna, who played herself and Glorfindel. The rest of the characters were as follows: Cimmerian (Azruk), Mym (Amanaduial and Lindir), Arwen_Baggins (Feaelenawen), Celebmundoiel (Celebmundoiel), Manelwen (Keldin, Daelothwen, Sillothwen), Nevtalathiel (Thrakatburz), Viking Thunder (Hogarth), and Alkerin (Therin).

ONE - Whispers of War

Elenna Starsong fought hard to sit still and failed. Nervously, she drummed her fingers on her knee and tapped her foot. Lord Elrond had summoned her to the Hall of Records for a private conference, but he had yet to arrive. What in the name of Elbereth, could he want to talk to me for? she asked herself.

But she didn't bother to contemplate an answer, because Lord Elrond himself suddenly entered the room. His blue robes were wrinkled and his hair, normally smooth, hung tangled around his face. Elenna looked at him in concern, and as his eyes met hers, she knew something was horribly wrong. His eyes, normally calm, were bright with emotion. Anger and fear ran rampant in them.

"My lord, what is wrong?" She couldn't quite conceal the tremor in her voice.

"Word has just come from Lorien. A host from Mordor has crossed the Nimrodel and is coming here."

"Are you sure?" The elf-maid's blue eyes clouded with anxiety. She had come to Rivendell to dwell ten years ago, and had already come to love it as a place of peace. Now war threatened its very walls.

"Completely sure. I have been up all night, trying to come up with some course of action to stem the tide of this evil."

"How many are there?"

"At least twenty thousand. Too great for the Galadhrim to even attempt to stall."

"And too great for the flooding of the Bruinen to deter, I suppose."

" Yes. We will have to fight. You, Elenna, will lead the forces of Rivendell into battle."

"Me? But I'm a maiden. And I'm so much younger than the rest of the warriors. I don't have nearly enough experience. Maybe Glorfindel."

"No. I have chosen you, and you will do this task."

"But why?"

"Many reasons. Do you remember when the Fellowship of the Ring was formed, and I refused to allow you to represent the Elves? It was because I had a premonition that you would be needed here."

Elenna interrupted. "And Glorfindel wouldn't let you send me."

The elf lord smiled wanly. "True. He would not thank me for sending you on such a dangerous quest. But what we do now may be as dangerous. You truly are the best choice. This is your destiny, Elenna Starsong. If you cannot save Rivendell, no one can and no one will." Elrond frowned. "And you have intimate knowledge of the orcs' commander."

Hot anger filled Elenna's heart. She reached over her shoulder and fingered her sword hilt. "Azruk," she muttered. Then, grasping the hilt, she drew the sword. Taking it in both hands, she knelt and presented it to Elrond. Pale sunlight shone on the curved blade, lighting one word carved on the silvery metal - Lalaith. "Command me, my lord Elrond. My blade and my life are forever pledged to you and Rivendell."


Elenna and Lord Elrond spent a few hours going over maps of Rivendell and the surrounding area, discussing weaknesses and strengths. Finally, the lord nodded at Elenna.

"I've kept you too long, child. It is nearly time for the noon meal, and Glorfindel will be wondering what is keeping you."

Elenna rose. "Do not worry, Lord Elrond. We won't allow anything to happen to this place. Now get some rest."

"There is one more thing, Elenna, one more reason Rivendell cannot be taken." Elrond glanced around nervously. "The Ring of Air, Vilya. If it were captured." he trailed off, and Elenna felt a new icy claw of fear grasp her heart. As if Rivendell itself weren't enough, now the fate of the world was in her hands. Glancing down, she saw the brown stripes of callus crossing her palm. I may not be a sorceress, nor a great commander, but I am a fighter. She looked up at Elrond again, all traces of fear gone from her face. Her jaw was set stubbornly, and a fierce fire burned in her eyes. The elf lord was surprised at the change, and a faint hope bloomed in his heart. Maybe, just maybe, they would succeed. Her words made him actually believe that Rivendell might survive.

"I swear to you, Rivendell will never fall while I have strength left." Then, turning, Elenna Starsong strode out of the chamber.
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The snaga led Azruk a merry chase through the tunnels of Lugburz.

"Hurry! Hurry!" the little orc whined as he scurried forward, his knuckles brushing the ground. "You have orders from High Up - mustn't be late!"

Azruk cursed under his breath, thinking of a thousand bloody ways he'd like to slice the snaga as he crouched to make it through a low doorway. It had been a year or two since he had been on any missions for the Eye, and he felt a burning desire to march, to fight, to conquer. And he had a feeling that he would be doing those things before long. A fierce grin on his face, he continued to follow the snaga.

After some time of running crouched through narrow tunnels, Azruk was finally brought to a large room with a high, vaulted ceiling. The air felt close and stuffy, and a foul stench permeated the room, disgusting even an orc.

"Wait here." The snaga glanced over his shoulder once and dashed off as if the very Nazgul were chasing him. Azruk stood nervously, wondering what was about to befall him.
Suddenly a chill wind blew into the room. Azruk shivered as it moved across his thick hide.

"Well, Azruk," a voice said. The Uruk-hai fell to his knees. He had heard this voice before only once - when he had been on Lugburz duty and had accidentally wandered into the top chamber. It was the voice of the Dark Lord. Powerful and deep as the fires that burned in Mount Doom, but reeking of pure evil, it whispered in Azruk's ear - a whisper more terrifying than a shout. "I have a task for you to perform." Azruk could only crouch lower and nod his head. "You are to lead a great host out of my lands and over the Misty Mountains. There, you are to conquer the House of Elrond, Rivendell."

Azruk raised his head. "I will kill all who dwell there!" he said fiercely, hoping against hope that the Dark Lord would be pleased.

"I care not. I only have one task for you - I have been told that the elf Elrond carries a Ring of Power. Bring it to me. And I believe there are some halflings at that house - bring them to me as well. And if you should fail." the voice, terrifying before, now became deathly cold. Azruk pressed his hands to his ears, trying to block it out.

"I shall not fail, my Lord."

A darkness lies behind us and we have turned our backs upon it, and we do not desire to return thither even in thought. Westwards our hearts have been turned, and we believe that there we shall find Light.

elenna
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(4/9/04 11:43 pm)
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Re: THE WAR FOR RIVENDELL
TWO - An Ill Wind


Amanaduial Tuarcuar sighted along the arrow, focusing on the brown rabbit nibbling grass a few yards in front of her. Pulling back the arrow and drawing in her breath, she prepared to shoot.

Suddenly a horse shot past, sending the rabbit scurrying for cover far out of sight. Aman slackened her bowstring and irritably muttered an oath. "Aye, that's right! Thunder past, scaring away my dinner! Don't worry about what I think!"

The rider whirled her horse around, her hand clenched firmly on the hilt of her sword. "What is your business here, stranger?" she said, her voice tinged with suspicion.

"I'm trying to hunt something for my supper, Elenna Starsong. And I am no stranger either to you or to this land!" Aman replied, trying hard to keep a straight face. She and Elenna had met a hundred or so years ago, and had traveled together on many an adventure or battle. "If you are going to scare off all of the game, you and your lord had better be prepared to feed a hungry wanderer."

Elenna laughed and dismounted, she and Aman grasping each other's forearms in a warrior's greeting. "The Lord would be happy to offer you food and shelter. Do you have a horse?"

"I didn't bring one with me, no. Yours is a fine beast." She stepped forward and eyed the tall gray stallion. "Battle trained, I suppose?"

"Yes, Celebdae is a beauty, isn't he? And fierce as a warrior in a pinch. But don't think to catch me off guard by praising my horse. How are you going to get to Rivendell by the evening meal without a horse? Celebdae has been running hard for two days, and I don't think he can bear us both."

"I believe I can get there before you anyway."

"Without a horse? How?"

Aman didn't answer the question. "Go on now! Hurry!" Elenna rolled her eyes and did as the other maiden said, cantering lightly off through the trees. Amanaduial watched her go. After the horse and rider were out of sight, she cried a spell word of summoning. A few seconds later, a black horse galloped out from the forest behind her. He was wearing heavy spiked armor, the kind which was found only on the beasts of Sauron's forces. Aman frowned. She had heard rumors on the wind of a fell army drawing closer, and now it must be very close indeed. She stripped away the armor and mounted it, nudging it forward with a few whispered words. She would meet Elenna at Rivendell, and question her further about the state of this land.

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A little while later Elenna stood by the River Bruinen as her horse drank his fill from the clear water. Behind her, she could hear the sound of hoof beats crunching on the small stones leading up to the riverbank. Not quite sure who it was, she turned, ready to fight if it was an orc. Instead, her eyes were met with a brown horse. On its back was an elf- maiden with long dark hair. Elenna frowned. Was her army fated to be made up completely of maidens? Still, she stood her ground as the rider approached.

"Mae govannen, Elenna! Do you not recognize me? Fëaelenawen, daughter of Elrond?"

"Of course! You left for Mirkwood long ago, am I right? Why are you back now?"

"I thought it was time I visited my father." Fëa smiled brightly, and then stopped as she saw Elenna's grim face. "Why do you grimace so? Is something wrong?"

"Come with me back to Rivendell. I'll explain when we get there."

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As Elenna and Fëa rode back to Elrond's house, a trumpeting neigh could be heard from the forest on their left. Elenna drew her sword, preparing to fight the orcs that she was sure were about to attack them. Fëa stared at her incredulously. "Why do you prepare for battle? This is my father's land! Nothing comes here that he doesn't give leave."

Elenna ignored her, continuing to try to see what was coming. Another neigh and she could see it - a white elven horse.

"Asfaloth!" she cried, urging her own horse forward. "Glorfindel!" she shouted. "What news from the north?"

The golden-haired rider reined his mount in. "Not much. I met a scouting party of maybe 10 orcs, but nothing larger." He leaned forward and kissed her quickly on the mouth. "And what news from the west?"

"Nothing, except for finding a few old friends. Amanaduial and Fëaelenawen, here."

Glorfindel smiled and nodded his head at Fëa. "We should hurry back - Elrond will be wanting to hear our tidings."

Their three horses cantered off, leaving behind only empty forest.

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As Elenna and her companions arrived at Rivendell, a new guest was being welcomed. Elrond came forward and embraced a tall maiden with long, golden hair. "Welcome, Celebmundoiel, to Rivendell. To what do we owe the pleasure of your visit?"

"My lady Galadriel heard of your peril, Lord Elrond. I have been sent by her to assist you in any way I can." She tossed her long hair over her shoulder and smoothed the skirt of her riding gown. Elenna groaned inwardly as she dismounted. Wonderful. Now I have to deal with a spoiled princess who will no doubt want to pause the war so she can fix a chipped nail.

Elrond gestured for Elenna to come over. "This is Elenna Starsong. She commands Rivendell's forces."

Celebmundoiel looked at Elenna with disdain. "She does? Surely there is some mistake! Has Glorfindel been injured?"

Glorfindel also got off his horse and came to where Elenna was standing. "No, I am just fine."

"Then why is a maiden commanding the defense of Rivendell?"
"I have my reasons, Celebmundoiel," said Elrond, a slight chill coming into his voice. "Now I trust you are weary from your long journey. Allow me to direct you to your chamber."

As she was led away, the blonde princess shot a look of pure venom back at Elenna, who rolled her eyes and turned away.

"Well, nobody said this job would be easy," Glorfindel chuckled as he led Elenna inside Rivendell.
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Azruk sat at a makeshift camp table a few miles southeast of Rivendell. His officers gorged themselves on the meat of captured horses, and a few more horrifying dishes. On his left the archer Narcis, an Uruk of unparalleled skill with the bow, recounted the capture of two elven scouts.

The time of carnage was nearing. Azruk looked around the camp and grinned fiercely. His crebain scouts had reported that the elven defenses were sparse and disorganized. The orcs howled, dancing around the fire upon which roasted something that was not a horse.

Azalel, the great black stallion reared up and snorted aloud, his demon blood raging to ride into war. His blood red eyes, deathlike and cold, gleamed at his master in anticipation. Most of the orc army would be on foot; their large numbers would run screaming and hurl their collective mass at the elves, forming a cushion for the elf arrows that would rain down. So that the melee warriors could rush in and raise hell, with a handful of wargs and crebain to cause nuisance and distraction, paving the way for the Uruks to move in for the final kill. Azruk tore at a chunk of meat, bloodlust and confidence thrilling through his veins. Soon, very soon, Elrond would fall, and Rivendell would be his.

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As darkness fell, a great force walked in the twilight through the Uruk camp. No one she traveled with now knew her real name, but the orcs called her Thrakatburz, bringer of darkness. All but the strongest feared her for though she walked in the form of an elf-woman, she had a great hidden strength and could over power even the greatest warrior at need. She seldom entered battles, knowing that her strength was in her mind, her tactics, ambushes and surprise attacks. Disobeying her orders was often the last thing an orc did.

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Elenna paced by the side of the little stream. Her mind hadn't been so troubled for as long as she could remember. So Azruk himself leads the host of the Dark Lord. she thought to herself. And a massive host it is at that. At least 20,000 orcs. Plus the Wargs and, may the Valar help us, the Uruk- hai. And Azruk is no fool - that much I know. She ceased pacing and sat down on a nearby rock. The water chuckled and babbled next to her, and she leaned down, running her fingers through the clear stream. Our army isn't great enough - we have mostly archers. Elrond's sons are gone with the Dunedain. That is two less hand-to-hand fighters. And there is no chance that they could be summoned in time. And to top it off, Rivendell's army is commanded by a maiden with no command experience! But another part of her spoke up. I swore revenge on Azruk long ago. I WILL kill him, for what he has done to me...and to my sister.

Then, standing up, she strode proudly back into Rivendell. War was creeping ever closer, and she did not have time for fear and worry. On the way in, she was met by Glorfindel.

"El, you have to come and eat something - it wouldn't do for our fearless leader to faint from hunger." He smiled, and she tried to return his good cheer. Seeing the worry etched on her face, Glorfindel went on. "You'll make yourself ill if you keep troubling yourself. We will triumph over Mordor's army."

He put his arm around her waist and drew her close. She held him tightly - At least Glorfindel will be with me. I know I can rely on him, she thought before allowing herself to be led to the dining chamber.

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