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(3/3/04 7:04 am)
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The First Thing I Ever Wrote
This is my first attempt to ever write anything, i've never been a writer, i do poems once in a blue moon when srtuck to do so, but the movie has inspired me even more after having such beautiful drool material to obsess over 
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Losshelma stood there heavy hearted as she watched her love Legolas walking of into the mist, on yet another one of his journeys. Just before he fully dissapearded into the mist he turned to her waved once more and then he was gone. Tears welled up in her eyes, figting them back she stood there still looking at the mist he had dissapeared into wondering how long he would be gone this time. Would she be able to stay sane from lonelyness this time around?
Losshelma slowly turned around to walk back to their cozy yet empty home. On the way home she walked by the trail which took you to the hidden springs, knowing she didn't want to go to a empty home just yet she descided to go relax in the spring. The spring was surrounded by giant willows, there was a small opening trough the top of the trees leting in the sun and in the center of the spring was a flat rock to lay on and bask in the sun.
She took off her cloak and sheer gown, revaling her naked body to the morning sun which was just begining to peek thru the mist. She slowly walked into the spring feeling it's warmth surround her naked flesh leting the soft bubbles which flowed from the bottom every now and then relax her tense muscles. She swam to the middle, climbed up onto the rock and lay on her back soaking up the sun which was now gleeming very brightly upon the spring.
Letting herself fully relax she started to ease off into sweet sleep when she suddenly felt eyes upon her, she sat up trying to cover her nakedness, looking around to see who was there. Her elven eyes saw no one but she did see where one of the willows branches had been disturbed. Jumping back into the water she yelled out "Who's there? Reveal your self to me now!" No one, no answer, nothing.
Who ever it was had gone. Losshelma descided it was best to return home, she swam back to the shore, quickly grabed her clothes, dressed and began walking home. Every so often she would look around her listening to the wood, to see if it would reveal that there was a follower, to her happiness she saw and heard nothing unatural. Who ever the secret admirer was, they were gone for now.
Reaching her home Losshelma began tidying up from the morning breafast and love making she and her beloved had shared before his departure, the scent of him was still in the sheets and pillows, she lay there cuddled up in them breathing deeply to soak up every ounce of his recent presence, then fell asleep among his scents and belongings.
Losshelma's eyes slowly opened after about four hours of sweet and uninterupted sleep, looked about the cozy room, streched and stood up. She sliped on her robe and thought about what she could do to pass the time untill Legolas returned to her once more. She wasn't much for company at this time and descided she didn't want to visit the women at the campfires tonight. They loved to gather in the clearing every 3rd night and gossip about all the things they saw, talk about their lovers or what the older wives had been spotted doing, while the ones w/children would shoo them off to play childrens games while they enjoyed the company of friends.
Losshelma descided she would travel up to the mountain top to send out blessings and spells for a safe return of her beloved Legolas and dance for the moon to regenarate her soul. She beagan collecting all the items needed for the over night task and packed them. Changed her clothes to something more fitting for the trek to the mountain top and set out. It was past mid afternoon and she would reach the mountain top by nightfall. The walk was a sweet one full of peace and tranquility as she watched the wood and it's life all around her, she was glad she had descided upon the travel instead of a night full of silly gossip.
Losshelma reached the top at dusk, just as she had predicted she would. She began to set up the place she would spend the night at, taking out candles and herbs for the spells and spreading out the sheets under the tree for sleeping. She then went to gather wood for a fire, it could get cold on the mountain top at nights even in the warm summer.
It was now dark and the moon was full, the stars shone brightly as the the fire made light dance upon the ground around her. She changed clothes to something more light and fiting for the ceramony. She began my spells and blessings calling out to the gods to protect her beloved Legolas and bring him home safely once more. When she was finished she hung her cloak on the branch of the huge oak and began her moon dance, eager to energize her soul once more.
She heard the sweet music of love and desire in her head, first she danced slowly around the fire, then as the heat inside her began to increase so did her movements, her lean fair body glistened under the sheer silver gown in the light of the fire. Losshelma moved away from the fire her body full of desire and passion moving seductively to the sounds of music within her. She was so wrapped up in herself she hadn't noticed her admirer standing in the distance watching her, desireing her, as he had done many times before.
She danced right into the arms of Erestor. They bagan to move sweetly together in harmony as if they were one. Their pace began to slow as their hearts beat loudly, she opened her eyes to see him before her for the first time. He was so beautiful his body gleaming in sweat, she hadn't noticed he was naked untill then. His sleek and muscular body pressed up against hers, eyes so dark and full of passion. The only thing between them was her sweat soaked gown, they began to move faster again, hearts racing, moving, whirling, then they stoped as suddenly as they had begun. Standing there staring at each other to their very souls.
He pulled her to him with such lustful force, looking at her searching her face for acceptance. She had seen him looking at her before when he tought no one was around to see his desires for her, it wasn't untill now that she to realized had secretly desired him for a long time as well.
He began to kissing her neck. It sent shivers down her spine making her week at the knees, they slowy nelt down upon the bed. His tounge began to travel down over her breats, finding her hardened nipples, ever so lightly he nibbled them, she moaned deeply. He had awakened her passion with such force, she pulled him to her face and beagan to kiss him lustfully. Their tongues were at war as he slid of her gown, his hands were feircely traveling her awaked body.
Losshelma wraped her legs around Erestor and felt his hardness enter her. She gasped in excitment which made him even more excited then before. Their bodies were fully intwined within each other, thrusting back and forth. Moaning and groaning at every throbing thrust, they took turns dominating the other, their bodies in a fight for power over the other. Soaked in sweat they finally were reaching the peak of their steaming lust, their bodies shivered and Erestor moaned loudly as his hotness shot out inside her making her gush as well.
They slowly wound down, holding each other tightly with little shivers here and there, they slowly sliped off to sleep still cradled in each others arms, bodies intwined. The fire and warmth between their bodies keept them warm thru out the night.
When Erestor awoke it was late morning, the sun was beaming, trickling thru the leaves of the huge oak they lay under. He looked over at Losshelma, his sweet desire. He had finally captured her, his fantasy had become a realitly. He looked upon her beauty, long dark hair flowing around her fair face, rosey pouty lips ever so slightly in a smile while she slept. His heart filled with joy at the sight of her, he leaned over and kissed her beautiful lips.
Feeling his warm lips upon hers she opened her eyes to see Erestor looking down at her, she blinked, she had assumed it was her sweet Legolas. The night before came flooding back to her forcefully, bringing a smile to her lips. Her heart fluttered, it was truely a night to remember. "Where do we go from here?" she asked him. It was then his smile faded, he knew she was bound to another and could never be his fully.
"I do not know my love." said Erestor. "I have loved you for so long, and was always to shy to let you know. I watched you grow up, turning in to a beautiful woman, desiring you more and more with each passing day. I tired to muster up the courage to let you know, when Legolas steped in."
"Oh Erestor i never knew, sure we were childhood friends, i just never realised you looked at me that way untill recently." Why hadn't she noticed his frienship as more, he was always the shy or quiet one. She just assumed he would find another more like him and live a happy life with her.
Erestor then looked at Losshelma smiling, with such saddness in his eyes and said, "Loss (his childhood nickname for her) I shall always treasure the moment we had together, I will keep this secret, it will never be spoken of by me." He kissed her once more and stood up to leave. "Please don't leave me alone!" she begged him, grabbing his hand, "Legolas is gone again on another journey and i cannot bear to be alone for so long agian, my heart will break this time for sure."
Erestor sat back down and wipped away her tears, promising not to leave until the return of Legolas. They sat on the hilltop holdng each other looking down upon the forest, wishing the day would srtetch forever.
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well that's it, i hope you like it, it's not really a storie just something that poped into my head and i sorta went with it on the spur of the moment...bleh
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