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Cimmerian
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(3/9/04 6:12 pm)
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A HOBBITS TALE : CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
Chapter Twenty One - To Imladris or not to Imladris



Andoras Headstrong, true to his name, stood up arrogantly on the stirrups of his pony.
"Tell me, friends," he asked, "Why do you think a city of elven folk will welcome us with open arms? We are not on a quest for them or amyone else but for our own selfish need."

"Besides we do not have time to dally around in pretty palaces," grunted Thoro.

Andoras nodded, "If you feel we should really go to Rivendell, explain to me why... or I daresay this fine gathering will be breaking sooner than I feared."

Rosa bowed her head and kept silent yet again. Maybe he's right. We don't need to go to Rivendell and get lectured by Elves. Telling us what we can and cannot do. We are on this quest for ourselves not for others.
She let out a breath she didn't know she was holding and smiled. Andoras was right. We do not need the Elves council.

Mentha turned to face Andy. "I can't think of any reason not to stop there, Andy. Its not like we're racing for this treasure. We don't even know if its really there. But I do know a lot of reasons we should go to Rivendell. As far as I know, the elves are a welcoming people, and they'll give us shelter, and a couple of nights in real, safe beds. And we should refuel our supplies, they may be able to sell us food and things. If time is as pressing as Thoro suggests, then we shouldn't be wasting time hunting."
Mentha stopped, not having meant to say that much that fast. She glanced to Tim and Amy for support.

Tim was glad Mentha had said something. He stepped forward, then.
"Yes, Andy, Mentha's right. I've met plenty of Elves, and not one has ever tried to do me harm. "
He glanced at the provisions on their pony. "No offense to Miss Ruby, but I would like to eat something that hadn't been cooked over a campfire--actually, I really can't remember the last time I myself have done that, personally. Elves are wonderful healers as well, and can give us things to help in case we run into some sort of trouble. What use will treasure be, if it's even out there, if we all starve or die of a wound? "

Andoras stood on his stirrups and pondered over what Mentha and Tim were saying. Both of them were older and wiser than he, but he needed more convincing, he looked up inquiringly at the elf healer.
"Will these elf kin of yours not try to disaude or even forcibly prevent us from going to this Mordor place?" he asked, raising an eyebrow.

The others too looked expectantly at Alythiel.


"They will not forcibly keep us at Imladris, friend Andoras. As for dissuading us, well, I do not know. But you have managed to ignore my counsel well enough. And if you wish to go on, Elrond will not stop you. But it would truly be madness to forego peace and safety, at least for a time."
Alythiel looked expectantly at the face of Andoras, wondering what he would say.


Ruby had been following the heated discussion without much interest. She did not really mind where they went, so she had kept silent. Whichever way the group went, she knew she would go with Andoras. He was incapable of looking after himself and she knew he would starve within a few hours if she abandonned him. She sighed and wondered what he'd decide and whether it would be a smaller band who set off to find the treasure.


Thoro plopped his axe on the ground and leaned on the handle by his stocky right elbow, scratching his generous rump with his left hand.
"Hurmm, What do you say, young Andoras? I have no more quarrell with the elfkind as I have now seen what they are really like. Many thanks to my friend Gimlo and also to the elf maid here. What say you, my young friend?"

Stroking his beard he looked expectantly at the young hobbit lad and then at the pretty little Rosa who sat behind him. He glanced at Ruby and Tom and grunted disapprovingly, leaning on his mighty axe all the while.

Ame sat close to Harry and hugged him tightly. She wasn't paying any attention to the argument.
She would go with Harry. But then again, what about Mentha? That was the bit of a problem.


Andoras sat back on his saddle, a look of consternation on his face. He pondered hard for a while. Mentha's words were not only wise but very practical, he thought. And leadership was not always about charging into things. Certain decisions should be made with more tact and finesse than others. Besides a good leader always cared for the welfare and feelings on his followers.
The young hobbit lad looked at Harry as Amy held on to him tightly, he glanced up at Alythiel, whose large doe like eyes met his with a look of concern. He looked down at Thoro, even the dwarf had put aside his undeniable dislike of the elf people and was ready to visit them.

Then Rosa put her arms around Andoras from behind him and whispered into his ear, "My darling, you know I would go to the ends of the earth with you, knowing full well that you would protect me with your life anywhere. But I am a wee bit tired of all this travelling in the wilderness. Maybe a few days of luxury and relaxation would do us all good and refresh us much so that we can resume our quest further with higher spirits."
The little hobbit lass finished with a gasp, it was far too much she had uttered in a long while and was nearly out of breath.

But that was all Andoras needed to crack, his iron hard resolve melted like butter in the warm sun at the reasonings of his lady love.

Andoras stared blankly ahead, then looked at Alythiel and said, "Allright, I suppose we could spend a day or two in this Rivendell. Show us the way, friend elf."

Alythiel breathed a deep sigh of relief and the others around echoed her. "A wise decision, dear Andoras," the elf maid smiled, "We will be there in a few hours. Come!"

"You did the right thing," Mentha came over and told Andoras, then she hugged Rosa, "I don't know what you said to him, young lady, but I am grateful to you for it."

Rosa smiled sweetly, holding on to Andoras tight, as the young hobbit nudged his pony forward.


"Onward!" roared Thoro, "To Imladris!"


Tim almost clapped his hands with happiness. He was getting rather tired of all this wandering in the wilderness, too--while he had pretty much lived in it most of his life, he hadn't ventured very far out of his grove. He heaved a sigh of relief as they went on.

The party moved on slowly and yet no one noticed that Gimlo was missing, not even Thoro.

Cimmerian
The Sentinel
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(3/9/04 6:14 pm)
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A HOBBITS TALE : CHAPTER TWENTY TWO
Chapter Twenty Two - No Rest for the Restless!



After several hours of walking, the party finally came to the Bruinen, the Loudwater of Rivendell. From across the river, a clear voice rang out.

"Who would cross the Loudwater? What is your business in Imladris?"

"I am Alythiel. I dwelt here long ago, as you know very well, Linwing. I and my companions have travelled far. We wish rest and food."

A blond male elf came out from the shadow of the trees, a bow clutched in his hand. Andoras's hand strayed to the hilt of his knife, but Alythiel grasped his wrist and turned it away. "Peace, Andoras. This is a friend, and a dweller in Elrond's house."

Tim caught his breath. He had seen numerous Elves, homless like him, but unlike him, travelling.

This certainly would be an experience, he hoped a good one...

Andoras looked over at the new elf suspiciously, but Alythiel reassured the hobbit lad. Yet he was still to be convinved.
As the two elves spoke, Andoras reined back his pony and motioned to the others hobbits to huddle near him.

"Allright, it seems all of you are excited about visiting this here place. But be wary, I say we stay close together through this."

"But Andy..." Tim whispered, "Elves are not..."

"That we may soon find out," Andoras cut him off brusquely, "I have never seen an elf before Alythiel and now we enter a city full of them. I merely wish to stay on my guard and I would also like all of you to do likewise."

"I... I... alright, Andy!" Tim stammered, and Mentha put a hand on his shoulder, "Easy, Tim. It appears that brave Andy is just being cautious and it is wise to be so. Don't worry, Andoras, we will be very much on our toes." She smiled and at once the years of wisdom seemed to dissasipate and Andoras found himself staring at a young, pretty hobbit lass.

"Allright, it's settled then," Andoras said, and then turning to Mentha, he whispered, "You should smile more often."

Mentha smiled again, this time she blushed as well and then hurriedly turned to face Tim.

Andoras turned to Thoro, "Do not express yourself at you leisure here, friend Thoro. We need not incur more trouble on us than we are worth."

"Fear not. I shall be civil," Thoro grunted, "Have you seen Gimlo?"

"No!" Andoras exclaimed, "Where is he?"

"Did he leave us?" Rosa inquired, looking around drowsily.

"Hasn't anyone else noticed?" Andoras yelled, "Gimlo is not present among us!"

"What?" Alythiel jumped. And the elfin newcomer nocked an arrow to his bow.

"Now calm down, everyone!" Mentha called out, "Let us retrace our steps, we shall find him."

But Thoro was already running in the direction the party had come from.

"Quick!" Andoras bellowed, "Follow Thoro, we must find Gimlo."

"Aye," shouted Harry Thistle, "He has had a good look at the map."

"A hunt!" shouted Ame, "Ai ai ai!"

"Oh!" Rosa squealed, Andoras's pony jerked her out of her stupor as it galloped forward.


Ruby held back, and Tom decided to wait with her and Mentha looked over at Tim, who was unsure and looked expectantly at the elves. Alythiel watched open-mouthed as the impestous half of group charged away from the Bruinin. She sighed, and kicked her horse to a canter after them.

Rosa nearly fell out of the saddle when the pony jerked around and ran at a steady gallop.
"I swear, I'm never going to go on a horse or pony AGAIN after this." She said silently clutching onto Andys tunic like her life depended on it.

All she could think about now was a nice warm and comfy bed in Rivendell that awaited her and all the food but Gimlo decided to run off.
She was starting to get annoyed and didn't like being sat on a hard saddle all day.

"I'm hungery and tired and cold and I need a bath." She murmured to no one in particular.


Tim stood and watched those on the horses take off. Looking back across the River, he sighed
deeply, then headed after them, albeit a bit more slowly, looking at the ground for any clues as to the Dwarf's whereabouts.

Alythiel was closer to tears than she had ever been. They had been so close to Rivendell, so close to a rest and some elves to talk with, and then another disaster befell them.
Mentally, as she slowed her horse to a walk, she tried to recall when she had last seen the dwarf Gimlo.


Ruby sighed a she watched the retreating backs of the majority of the group. It wasn't that she didn't trust the elves, it was just that she felt it would be better if the group remained together, especially if they were to be given council by Elrond.

She turned to the others; Mentha, Tim, Tom and the elf who had greeted them.

"Well, we may as well be helpful." She said to no one in particular and then to the elf "Take us to the kitchens, I want to have a nice hot meal prepared for them by the time they get back, we haven't eaten a proper meal for weeks." Dadzedly, the elf turned, he had not been expecting these little people to be so commanding.


Mentha frowned; she didn't like half of the group barreling off into who knew what danger, but there was nothing she could do about it. At Ruby's words, she turned and followed the elf. Ruby had clearly noticed her frown; she walked over to Mentha and took her by the arm.

"Look, I'm sure they'll be fine. Alyth will look after them, she knows this area well enough."

"I suppose so... I can't help but worry, though."

Ruby smiled at the older hobbit. "You spend far too much time worrying, just relax. The others will be okay, and you and I can get something set up for when they get back. Tim and Tom will look after us." Ruby turned and smiled at the hobbits who were folloing them, and Mentha noticed a faint blush appear on Tom's cheeks as he smiled back.

Tim had been walking slowly through the woods. Most of the party had charged ahead of him on
horseback, but as he watched them pass, he noticed not all. Some of them stayed behind, he thought to himself.

"I'm going to go back to the others!" he called to the last rider who passed him, and did so.

Tim walked back to the group that had stayed behind. Coming closer to the group, he heard Ruby give the Elf who had greeted them what sounded like orders. The Elf's jaw dropped, then he turned and led them in another direction. Tim sauntered to catch up with them.


Meanwhile Andoras raced Adon onward before Thoro, who prefered to run instead of ride. Rosa clutched on to the young hobbit lad's tunic for dear life as the white pony galloped hard, often leaping over shrubs and bushes. Looking over his shoulder he saw that the pony Harry and Ame shared was riding back in the opposite direction. He frowned, that wasn't like Harry. He made up his mind to have words with his best friend about it later... with his fists.

There could be some danger involved and Andoras could use all the help he could get. Especially
from strong young hobbits like himself. Glancing back, he breathed a slight sigh of relief to see Alythiel come galloping onward. Muttering to himself that he should have left Rosa behind with the more matured hobbits, he kicked the pony's flanks harder.

"Where was Gimlo?" he thought, as the wind blew his curly black hair over his eyes

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